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"redrumline" jutties tub-"rum-pa-pyium-pum" az "rhod-essian" e-nil murders "rumspringa" %^り

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That's not a drum, it's a gun. But regardless, I'm glad to see you post another poem... I was a bit worried by your absence. I've not been using substack very long, but noticed your silence. I'm glad your back and ok. (Sorry - unsought concern of a stranger! I'll stop now.)

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Much appreciated! By the by: https://www.amazon.com/m4-drum-mag/s?k=m4+drum+mag

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Ahh, a gun-drum!! lol

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Perhaps an even further writing pun, as the “drum-clip” is truly called a “drum MAGAZINE”

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